tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14030974.post112128465508973434..comments2023-08-29T07:01:47.606-07:00Comments on We who love to be astonished: All the talk of Langauge Poetry is getting to me. . .Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16815211343188065711noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14030974.post-1121799878122812002005-07-19T12:04:00.000-07:002005-07-19T12:04:00.000-07:00love itright on, Tonylove it<BR/>right on, TonyLorna Dee Cervanteshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01239920845079483543noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14030974.post-1121696992940511692005-07-18T07:29:00.000-07:002005-07-18T07:29:00.000-07:00Thanks Tony! I didn't think you'd like it. I'm n...Thanks Tony! I didn't think you'd like it. I'm not even sure if I do. . .but you make a good case. . .Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16815211343188065711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14030974.post-1121634185848256222005-07-17T14:03:00.000-07:002005-07-17T14:03:00.000-07:00Yes, of course this poem is about desire. And it'...Yes, of course this poem is about desire. And it's a good one to boot.<BR/><BR/>The "you blank me" rhetorical construction is what helps the "average reader" make "sense" of it. <BR/><BR/>But the word choice is what makes it interesting. <BR/><BR/>More!Anthony Robinsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15344532091414013818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14030974.post-1121292627689955912005-07-13T15:10:00.000-07:002005-07-13T15:10:00.000-07:00Hey there! I found your blog through a post on chr...Hey there! I found your blog through a post on chris' blog. I thought Id stop by and say hello!<BR/>I really dig this poem. The rhythm to it is fantastic. Its something I would hear in NYC or here in Boston at a poetry Jam/Slam.Cherylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09403817807419812186noreply@blogger.com