dares) that you have given
sound a spine, brought
into stitches of hair,
dust, wool. Clay is red
clay in a river bed awake
and speak. Clouding
lifts my eyelids,
pupils and Saturn
ecstasy out of lime
seeds, small yellow
city on your breastplate.
Begin again
and collapse, a spitting
wind in a slew
for flashbulbs. Pop. Smoke.
the planets.
((Another poem from the collaboration.))
2 comments:
Cool!
What if it had no punctuation, no caps? Take advantage of all the linebreaks & layers, and ruleless abandon.
Thanks, Lorna. I've revised it without punctuation-- works quite well. You're right about the ruleless abandon.
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